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Only Half Of The Story by ~LilyDreams:iconLilyDreams:



"Only Half Of The Story"

“I need to go it alone,” you told me.
I didn’t fight it. “I understand,”
even though I hadn’t a clue,
and the tears were welling up inside.
I quickly hid them from the world.
They needn’t know this sorrow.
Not yet.

Days passed. Weeks. A month.
No change.
I don’t know how I lasted that long.
My mind was in pieces, my spirit in turmoil.
Do you realize what I went through for you?
For love?

You may think you’re right,
but oh, how wrong you really are.
Your friends are just that: friends.
Do you know the meaning of the title?
It carries significant weight,
full of nuances and mystic treasure.
We are bound to you forever,
even if you leave us.
Our hands are always outstretched,
though you may not meet us halfway.
You seem to forget
just how special you are to us.
To yourself.
To the world.

Take my hand.
Meet my gaze.
Open your mouth,
and we’ll open our ears.

Purge,
and we will catch it.
Stagger,
and we will hold you up.
Weep,
and we will weep with you.

It’s your choice.
Go it alone and risk your identity…
or help us to help you
go forward
in this life.
©2007-2009 ~LilyDreams
:iconlilydreams:

Author's Comments

I think my inspiration is back.

I need the title of this to say what its current title is saying, only worded better. Or perhaps it's worded just right the way it is. I don't know. It might change at some point.

And yes, there will be another poem telling the other half of the story. It'll all make more sense in the end as to why I chose this title. Don't worry :)

By all means, tell me what you think.

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:iconmoquimarbl:
beautiful poem. I related to it a lot. Probably lame but I think "Go It Alone" is a good title.

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Silence is golden but duct tape is silver!
:iconpolkadottedlove:
Rachel, I really like this -- it flows together so well!

Perhaps, "Unconditional" could work as a title -- relating to the unconditional, ever flowing love of friendship?

Awesome!
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:iconlilydreams:
:) That's not lame at all. And thanks for the comment!
You get a cookie because you're awesome. :cookie:

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:tea: Tea makes everything better.

"Carpe. Carpe Diem. Seize the day boys. Make your lives extraordinary."
--Mr. Keating in "Dead Poets Society"

:peace: + :heart: = :lol:
:iconlilydreams:
Aww, thanks so much! :aww:
You get a cookie because you're awesome as well. :cookie:

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:tea: Tea makes everything better.

"Carpe. Carpe Diem. Seize the day boys. Make your lives extraordinary."
--Mr. Keating in "Dead Poets Society"

:peace: + :heart: = :lol:
:iconthe-silver-assasin:
Nice! :clap:

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Don't mess with me. I bite and I like the taste of blood. >:3
Life is short. Play naked.
:iconphoenixmentality:
i think its written very well...it makes me think of buddhism...um...not that i know very much about buddhism...my suggestion for a title is: "The Beginning"...:peace:

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:music:Shark of the Sky:music:
:iconlilydreams:
:D Thanks!

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:tea: Tea makes everything better.

"Carpe. Carpe Diem. Seize the day boys. Make your lives extraordinary."
--Mr. Keating in "Dead Poets Society"

:peace: + :heart: = :lol:

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