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A tickle
of the skin.
A tingling
of the cheek.
A flicker
of a tendril
of hair.
Something is coming,
foreboding, menacing.

A bustling
of the thin red coat,
meant for early fall,
not for this.
A shivering
down the spine,
so sturdy and strong,
and yet so vulnerable
to something invisible,
intangible.

Suddenly—

An explosion
of wind
that sends crunchy leaves dancing,
hearty trees bending,
and little houses howling.
Eyes shut tight,
I feel it,
all across my body,
every pore filled with
frigid
fierce
air.
I feel it. Everywhere.

And,
as quickly as it starts,
it weakens.
The coat falls still,
the long hair hangs calm,
the buildings compose themselves.
Dying leaves end their hoedown,
and trees stand tall once more.

And the people
go about
their day,
like nothing ever happened,
like nothing ever happens.

But I,
I will remember that wind,
that glorious,
glorious wind
that moved me.
©2007-2009 ~LilyDreams
:iconlilydreams:

Author's Comments

I thought I might try something different this time. I got inspired one day.
(By the way, UNI is one of the windiest campuses in the country.) :lmao:

This is definitely meant to be spoken. It's too bad that I can't upload an audio of it being recited.

As always, constructive criticism is very welcome!

Started: October 19, 2007
Finished: October 30, 2007

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I know that feeling so well. :O

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